only becuase of the black marks and there a line to the left bottom area that need to be faded other that would look really good but not one of my fav from the over that you have made that have looked much more kick ***
o and ticket ill give you a 8/ 10 on yours looks good
5/10, focal is too off to the side, could have erased the sprayed strokes off of the focal a bit more, and the text in the opposite corner of the focal is like competing for attention. Overall, it's too unfocused. Likin the vector effects though.