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[XDC Jinno]

you had the lightsource down, but you seem to lack effects with the test images. gow and megan.

 

[Jupiter]

^^^ I agree. you should def start working with other effects such as star stocks, c4ds, bubbles, fractals.. etc

 

[xxThanatosx89]

I had around 500 stocks on my computer c4d abstracts fractals renders but my idiot bro deleted them haven't got around to restorin em yet but I see what you saying lot of my sigs have large open areas but I made that last one on Gimp and I'm starting to learn how to use it better. Thank you both for your help : D

 

[Jupiter]

no problem definitely take your time on learning the program ive heard it can be pretty complex.

 

[xxThanatosx89]

Well when I first started using it the format changed alot since then so tool me awhile to get that Gow sig done. But tuts are helpful but I'm kinda more hands on then instructions when I learn myself I remember lots better. Unless I study like crazy I'd forget real quick.
I got foto flexor down just cause it's really easy and it'll teach ya the basics so I'd strongly recommend that for anyone who's just startin out.

 

[XDC Jinno]

if you need help with gimp tools, im here, or you can check out tuts off youtube, I did 2 of my first signatures off youtube.

 

[xxThanatosx89]

well this is what i got just fooling around with it
thx u for ur help

 

[XDC Jinno]

nice improvement in the signature, a little sharpen on the lady with the tats by 10, looks good, kiu

 

[xxThanatosx89]

thank you very much worked very hard on it

 

[xxThanatosx89]

okay 1 of the new test images only thing was it felt a little blurry o his face

2nd version pretty much same thing

 

[XDC Jinno]

Its a good signature, just would be great if you didn't blur the whole signature. lightsource should be on the right.

 

[v Gogeta]

Those particles look kind of weird, do they have an outer glow on them? And yes as Snowfall said, the light source from the render is coming from the right, but you have yours on the left.

 

[xxThanatosx89]

Ohk blonde moment I'll switch them around
As for the blur idk it's clear when I start and finish but when I upload it for the URL it gets fuzzy

 

[Jupiter]

check this out.. if you cant see it u may have to create a free account
http://www.guildinn.com/forum/beginners/20039-basic-c4d-use-tutorial-lesson-glass.html

 

[xxThanatosx89]

personally like this one more with out the text

 

[XDC Jinno]

I think she would be better off with color, move her a bit left and blend her to the background. I think the c4d on the left is more of a distraction.

 

[KoG Mufasa]

I completely agree with snowfall, if your focal was more towards the centre but not in the centre and blend in that c4d so it doesnt draw the eye away from the focal it would be much better, text is always hard to do, probably the hardest thing about a sig. For the color, i like the black and white but if it was colored it would look even better, and not just one color.

 

[KoG Mufasa]

needs... work...

 

[xxThanatosx89]

I figured when i redid it I just cropped it blurred and messed with the lighting

 

[KoG Mufasa]

it looks better than the old one but i think you get what im saying.