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[Jupiter]

the banner looks better color wise but the text is still really hard to read. maybe try white with a black stroke & lower the opacity of the stroke to like.. 40%

the sig i like the colors & effects, it probably feels cluttered cuz you have a bunch of text right next to the guys head. try moving it down a bit maybe even make it a tad bit smaller.

 

[XDC Jinno]

Not to fond about the broken glass on the signature, doesn't seem to fit imo.

 

[xxThanatosx89]

yea i wasnt to sure about that either SNowfall-thx for the help
sakura-yea the text on the banner is hard to read but idk i just liked how sharp it was
also yea that was probably the reason the text was to big and that frosty stuff didnt really work

just got done with this one

i kinda like the smaller one more

 

[XDC Jinno]

The text sticks out like a sore thumb. Still a great signature kiu

 

[xxThanatosx89]

Yea slapped that dark black right on the white I didn't think it was too distracting but there's no getting around seeing it

 

[Jupiter]

try doing a white text with a 1px black stroke on 30%
i like the effects & the contrast is nice.

 

[xxThanatosx89]

I did a blur around the render for the first time in an attempt to add depth what do you think?

 

[Jupiter]

for your first time trying it out not bad

 

[xxThanatosx89]

Thank you : D

 

[xxThanatosx89]

the training grounds image

tried a gif i know its small

 

[XDC Jinno]

I couldn't get to do anything with it, and I think you did great, there are parts that needed to be erased such as effects on most of her face n the clutter, still an attempt which is great

 

[xxThanatosx89]

Thank you I was not sure what to do because the image was so bright on the left side so I just went with it

 

[xxThanatosx89]

i luv her facial expression

 

[SYN Dwurst]

The FMA sig is pretty sweet

 

[xxThanatosx89]

whats FMA mean?

 

[xxThanatosx89]

What do you all think of my last sig? It's on the previous page

 

[Jupiter]

Your colors are kinda of bland, theres nothing that really pops in that sig. & you have a bunch of emtpy space on the left, thats where i would have placed the text & i also would have moved her a little more left rather than sticking her on the edge.

 

[Rave]

One thing that I noticed in a lot of your sigs is that you place your focal to far to the edge. Try moving your focal a little over.

 

[D3SIGNx]

I think the colored one looks a bit better...

The thing that I would do is clean up her face and neck a little bit. I don't know if the problems (lines) on her neck and face are in the actual picture or if the lines are due to a layer above her face.

Also I would try to move the girl a little over just like XDC Rave XS said.

 

[xxThanatosx89]

Idk not sure about this one