I love the render. The left side of Altair looks good, I like how you wrapped the C4D around his arm. The right side is kind of jumpy, doesn't have any flow. You should brighten the text a little bit as well- I can hardly read it.
im back and will apply for the design team once again and hopefully become part of the video team also i wont be around as much as i was but hey im back but im trying to change my name back to KEVO241