FINISHED WEEK'S

[Jupiter]

try different borders i see you use the same type a lot. you also use the same text too mix it up a little as long as it still looks good

 

[Snyder GFX]

work on blending your render adding c4ds and effects in front and over your render

 

[Mazfam7]

MAZFAM7-WEEK 3

Mazfam7-week 3

srry for being so late lol

 

[XDC Jinno]

nice signatures man. the colors are great. and just skim through a bunch of signature tutorials in deviantart.com , pick up ideas/replicate other peoples signatures if it helps. since you got the basics down lean how to use a lightsouce, flow, colors, c4d, etc. again nice improvement

 

[Jupiter]

crazyyyy blurry, clear it up

 

[XDC KiLLaCam]

Thanks you guys

 

[Mazfam7]

better?

 

[XDC KiLLaCam]

haha new look i wanted to try out wat do you think

 

[Jupiter]

much, nice effect

 

[XDC Jinno]

I dont think anything was added other then text and a boarder.

 

[Mazfam7]

thx 1st time i tried ti

 

[XDC KiLLaCam]

i added some star things in the background if you look close and added that shutter look. but i appreciate the critisism makes me better and better

 

[Snyder GFX]

it looks like you have a pattern over it try and keep the main focal clean also work on depth blur it up then erase where you dont want it so blurry to create the depth

 

[XDC KiLLaCam]

it doesnt have alot of effects but i made it for my friend and this is what he wanted so idk lol

 

[XDC Jinno]

Nice look man. idk what kind of dimensions they provide in their site but we do 500x200. the left side of the background is a bit empty. so , in my opinion, crop most of the left side and the bottom.. I still like it though very nice man.

 

[XDC KiLLaCam]

i really like this one wat about you guys

 

[KoG Mufasa]

border = no... put your focal closer to the middle (rule of thirds) colors arent bad but needs more effects. kiu

 

[Jupiter]

yeah try to avoid putting your render or text in corners.. follow the rule of thirds..here.. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rule_of_thirds read up on that for info on how to follow that. also.. did you erase whatever was around your render? if so then it neds some touching up theres some spots arounds him that you missed nice job on the colors though

 

[Jupiter]

new image up, cnc plz

 

[FoCus]

Text is really hard to read. and lighting isnt good.