KoG Machina
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I agree. Also the pics take away from the article... they need to be smaller and be where they don't take over.
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XGC Axecident
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or if you are going to have humongous pictures, you need a bigger article
Gingersaurus
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To me, this article has no depth. No natural rhythm.
I want to know more about this game. I want to know what it is that makes the game special, not mediocre.
I want to know more about this game. I want to know what it is that makes the game special, not mediocre.
T3h Infection
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I really didn't want to spoil anything in the preview... I just don't like to take anything away from the experience of the game. I just wanted to give bare information to just feed curiosity, then when you would play the game that it would be a new experience. So you don't go "Oh... Yeah. I knew that was going to happen." If you want I'll redo it.
KoG Machina
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Well the game isn't out so anything you can spoil won't be that big anyways....(Most of the time).... but for the most part I think you need to work on finding the natural flow of your writing so that you can wright a smoother article that will catch the readers.
Just ask us if you have any questions!
Just ask us if you have any questions!
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The action packed series of Mafia continues with number two this August 24,2010.
Genre: Action
Publisher: 2K Games
Developer: 2K Czech
ESRB:M
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C,PS3,Xbox 360
Into gun busting car chases,hand-to-hand combat,and fervent gunplay.Mafia II is the game for you.Enter the world of mafia set in '40s and '50s Empire Bay.With a new storyline and gameplay this is a game to watch for this summer.
Storyline
Meet Vito the son of an poor Italian immigrant.Growing up in a tough Empire City he learns the only way to evade poverty is to join the mafia.Hoping not to follow into his father's footsteps he dreams about being a "Made Man".A small time criminal most of his life,Vito,and his childhood friend Joe.They will soon prove themselves to the mafia by doing robbery,and theft.The life towards a "Made Man" is not so easy as they quickly climb the mob ranks.
Gameplay
Violent car chases,theft,fighting,killing,and did i mention killing.Gameplay will be like GTA but in a more realistic version.
Features
2K Czech is bringing out their illusion engine which allows player to roam around the limits of Empire Bay's 10 square miles with quick transitions from churches to highways without loading.
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1) KoG LaG
2) Kings of Gaming
3) Interviews & reviews
4) OLD Work below
The action packed series of Mafia continues with number two this August 24,2010.
Genre: Action
Publisher: 2K Games
Developer: 2K Czech
ESRB:M
Also on
C,PS3,Xbox 360Into gun busting car chases,hand-to-hand combat,and fervent gunplay.Mafia II is the game for you.Enter the world of mafia set in '40s and '50s Empire Bay.With a new storyline and gameplay this is a game to watch for this summer.
Storyline
Meet Vito the son of an poor Italian immigrant.Growing up in a tough Empire City he learns the only way to evade poverty is to join the mafia.Hoping not to follow into his father's footsteps he dreams about being a "Made Man".A small time criminal most of his life,Vito,and his childhood friend Joe.They will soon prove themselves to the mafia by doing robbery,and theft.The life towards a "Made Man" is not so easy as they quickly climb the mob ranks.
Gameplay
Violent car chases,theft,fighting,killing,and did i mention killing.Gameplay will be like GTA but in a more realistic version.
Features
2K Czech is bringing out their illusion engine which allows player to roam around the limits of Empire Bay's 10 square miles with quick transitions from churches to highways without loading.
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Fleetleader
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so... anyword on my app? Kindof tired of waiting.
XGC Axecident
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Fleet, we review the APPs @ our meetings on Thursday (right?? i think it is thursdays...)
so we will discuss it then (i think?)
so we will discuss it then (i think?)
KoG Muffin
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Alright so some critizism
First: I actually have wrote an article about this on the home page therefore its been used so try not using a topic thats already been wrote about.
Second: it was pretty short and lacked some good details which made it a little dull.
But for some good news You did get a pic up and so it shows effort towards your article but otherwise keep in mind what i said and I wish you luck.
First: I actually have wrote an article about this on the home page therefore its been used so try not using a topic thats already been wrote about.
Second: it was pretty short and lacked some good details which made it a little dull.
But for some good news You did get a pic up and so it shows effort towards your article but otherwise keep in mind what i said and I wish you luck.
XGC Axecident
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lets see a personal review of MW2
get your thoughts in it, and what you like / dislike
get your thoughts in it, and what you like / dislike
KoG Muffin
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Ok this is to let you know we need you to write another Article plz so we can see some more of your writing style thanks and hope you make it!
KoG Muffin
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Ok this is to let you know we need you to write another Article plz so we can see some more of your writing style thanks and hope you make it!
KoG Muffin
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Ok this is to let you know we need you to write another Article plz so we can see some more of your writing style thanks and hope you make it!
Btw it was thursday and we voted so make sure you make the meetings Bpley
Btw it was thursday and we voted so make sure you make the meetings Bpley
KoG Muffin
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Ok this is to let you know we need you to write another Article plz so we can see some more of your writing style thanks and hope you make it!
KoG Muffin
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GREAT JOB on making it in so not sure what happens to this thread now we'll have to ask Killyntym
KoG Muffin
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Ok this is to let you know we need you to write another Article plz so we can see some more of your writing style thanks and hope you make it!
KoG Muffin
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Ok this is to let you know we need you to write another Article plz so we can see some more of your writing style thanks and hope you make it!
KoG Muffin
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Ok this is to let you know we need you to write another Article plz so we can see some more of your writing style thanks and hope you make it!
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