OLD NEWS TEAM APPLICATIONS

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XGC Next Agee

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XG NEWS TEAM APPLICATION COMPETITION

XG News Team Application Competition

Guys the work coming from you all if great stuff, great use of vocabulary, punctuation and great points!

Now i kinda wanna run a competition between all the guys and girls applying for the News Team so,

Write an article on your favourite game(s).

No Close Date Just as soon as possible!

Post Finished Work In This Folder!

Good Luck All!​

PLEASE DO NOT COMMENT IN THIS FOLDER, REVIEWS ONLY!​
 
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XGC Next Agee

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APPLICATION COMPETITION!

Application Competition!

Guys the work coming from you all if great stuff, great use of vocabulary, punctuation and great points!

Now i kinda wanna run a competition between all the guys and girls applying for the News Team so,

Write an article on your favourite game(s).

No Close Date Just as soon as possible!

Post the Finished Work in the folder link below!

http://www.xiledgaming.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1515852#post1515852

Good Luck All!​
 
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KoG IrishReaper

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i wasnt really wanting more posts ... i have enough i believe but its just sometimes i get annoyed when no one posts so i post alot myself ... i like active forums ... sorry
 
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XGC Next Agee

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Its fine Bro, its just it starts to clog up the folder when people need to view your work and you are kinda not really allowed to double post but oh well i do it ahha are you going to take part in the competition?
 
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DarkSpartan PAU

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I am agreeing with a previous comment from before. You should not write your articles so short. I dont even know the game yet it feels like you leave oout a lot of information. All you skip subjects to quickly and you dont identify the subjects before you say them. It goes from one subject to the without and inner piece transitioning. You also need to indent paragraphs and use comma's.

Here read this:

Greetings gamers and computer geeks alike. I am spartanJB333 here to give you another review on our prized gaming community of Xiled Gaming.

Xiled Gaming is a very reathe taking site because it is so intimidating because so many gamers visit this site every day and they are also a part of a clan on this site.

Being part of Xiled Gaming has givin me an opportunity to make new friends and to explore an enormous gaming community.

Upon joining Xiled Gaming, you are givin four divisions in which you can join.

These divisions are:
1.The Xiled Gaming Clan (XGC)

2.The Kings of Gaming (KoG)

3The Syndicate (SYN)

4.The Xiled Gamer Girlz (XGG)

Lets start with the Xiled Gaming Clan.

The XGC is an 18 years and up gaming community in which our more mature recreational gamers can hang and play with each other. Most of our leaders are part of this division. A few clans that are located in this division are XGC ARMADA, XGC BASIC, and XGC COLDFIRE.

Next is The Kings of Gaming division.

KoG is made up many different people. Even though it follows the same honor code system as XGC, KoG lets gamers of any join the division. A few clans in KoG are KoG Crusade, KoG Basic, and KoG KINGS.

Third is The Syndicate.

The Syndicate is similar to KoG except for one thing. They allow trash talking in their division. This is the only division in XG that allows trash talking. A few clans in The Syndicate are SVN Dynasty, SYN Devastation, and SYN Empire.

And last but not least, The Xiled Gamer Girlz.

This clan is a gaming community for girls only. No Exceptions.

Now you know Xiled Gaming so get out there and join a division if you haven't already.

-this is spartanJB333 signing out...

Read this and see if it helps
 
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KoG IrishReaper

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i see what ur saying but i believe in making short brief reviews .... so that there is still mystery in the game when u get it .... i dont believe in giving it all away .... and also sometimes longer stories are bothersome to read and sometimes even bore the reader ... but i will work on my transitions from paragraph to paragraph and start to indent .... ty for commenting

and next agee ... i might ... it depends on how busy i am ... i normally try to write an article every time i go on xg and make 2 signatures because i am also applying for the design team at the same time ... but i will make my best effort and try to ... ty for commenting
 
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