[ACCEPTED!!!] XGC DRESDENDOLL'S DESIGN APPLICATION

XGC Radioactive

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the light source shouldn't be that direct, move it off screen unless something in the background is giving off light, i.e the sun, fire, ect..

the blue arrows just point to a lapse, looks like you might have accidently moved it to the left and it left that bit of a line. no biggie. i just happen to notice it.
 

XDC Dresden

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I have no clue why there's a red line at the bottom. I've gone through all my layers. It doesn't show up when I'm actually in Gimp though. :-( I thought this was going to make a nice signature too. :'(
 

XDC Dresden

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I think it's the gradient I used on Domo. :-( But can't erase it because it's on my render. And I don't want to get rid of it because I like the effect. Sad face.
 

SYN Ichigo

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I have no clue why there's a red line at the bottom. I've gone through all my layers. It doesn't show up when I'm actually in Gimp though. :-( I thought this was going to make a nice signature too. :'(

Put a 2 pixel black border around the outside of the sig and that should fix it. =)
 

XGC Radioactive

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I'm not digging this one, i can place my finger on it...something about the color scheme...?

needs to be sharpened too, and text is a bit hard to notice. i personally think the shadow in the right side of the sig is too dark, I'd lighten it a bit with the burn/dodge tool.

overall though good job. good effects.
 
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